So I've been doing a lot of thinking and some organising and more thinking in response to the organising and I think I've completely rewritten my film. For the better I hope. Lots of interesting and talented people have been giving me their advice and I think what they are telling me is, try a bit harder and it might improve. So that's what I've done. There is still a boy and still a bear but perhaps a bit more blood this time. More info when I have more info.